Collegiate Peaks
If my soul went to college it would study the art of silence, and the rhythm of breath. Deep in the mountains, among the twist and crunch of sun-burnt pine, my soul would inhabit their scorched broken scent. I would wander about in thin, chill mountain air—-climbing up and over scratchy granite boulders. Seeking nothing. Knowing only that somewhere, high up in these impossible mountains, possibility exists. I would traipse across narrow ridge tops: all focus, all breath. I would shriek and slide down icy damp snowfields—-then clamber back up for more. I would steady my gaze on the falcon as it circles above. I would insist that my body keep moving. I would insist that my fears slip away.
I always knew it would be like this: a woman walking alone into naked clear waters. Trudging along hard-packed trails. Sleeping under the stars. Even before I could speak, I knew—–that cathedrals made me claustrophobic and that hearts rip, among the jagged silence of mountains.
Anne O’Regan
Newton, Massachusetts
June 1, 2009

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June 6, 2009 at 1:00 pm
Kim
Anne
Your writing is beautiful. I was pulled into your utopia.
Thanks
Kim
June 16, 2009 at 1:27 am
Judy Safford
I was taken away to my own visual mountain experience as soon as I read the art of silence and the rhythm of breath.
I also loved the woman walking into naked clear waters. Those beautiful words took me back to mountain hikes and the beauty of being alone in nature.
Thank you so much for painting such a lovely journey.
Judy
June 25, 2009 at 1:46 am
seaglassgirl
The second stanza and the “I always knew it would be this way” made me go read the first part again. Amazing. And the detail of the gaze on the falcon. Great.
cissy
July 10, 2009 at 1:18 am
Mike
Ann: Your sense of rhytham and consistency makes it such a strong piece. MJ Gleason, fomerly of Wellesley ;-)
August 26, 2009 at 1:17 am
Terrie
Ann – “among the twist and crunch of sun-burnt pine, my soul would inhabit their scorched roken scent.” This snatched my breath in the way only original and vivid words can. Great writing.